EDITING CHECKLIST III___Check for the following

1. PROP

On June 2009, he waited the day before her birthday to buy for her a present.
Sharma likes to go the park, and she never likes to play dolls.

In June 2009, he waited until the day before her birthday to buy her a present.
Sharma likes to go to the park, and she never likes to play with dolls.

2. CS

The thunder stopped, even though she was wet, she did not use a towel, her husband needs it more, so she dripped dry. She loved him, however he didn't apprectiate that, how sad.

The thunder stopped. Even though she was wet, she didn't use  towel. Her husband needed it more. So she dripped dry. She loved him. However he didn't appreciate that. How sad.


3. FRAG

After they visited the zoo. They hurried to the airport. They too late for their flight.
When the policeman arrived in their patrol car after twenty minutes.
Due to financial difficuties, Prabir back to Pakistan last June.

After they visited the zoo, they hurried to the airport. They were too late for their flight.
When the policeman arrived in their patrol car after twenty minutes, all wheels of the car were stolen.
Due to financial difficuties, Prabir back to Pakistan last June.


4. RUN-ON SENTENCE

It was vey dark, as soon as the criminal saw the cops he jumped over the wall and disappeared into the shadows they could never find him after that.

It was very dark. As soon as the criminal saw the cops, he jumped over the wall and disappeared into the shadows. They could never find him after that.


5. TENSE

The criminal waited four hours until the store had been closed.
Jesse was seemed afaid before the exam. He broken down and crying.

The criminal had waited four hours until the store closed.
Jesse seemed afraid before the exam. He broke down and cried.


6. PERIODS/COMMAS/CAPS/SPACES

Jesse went to the no fill supermarket. in spite of her illness ,Sharma went with him.They took a taxi there. Before they arrived,the taxi broke  down .

Jesse went to the No Fills Supermarket. In spite of  her illness, Sharma went with him. They took a taxi there. Before they arrived, the taxi broke down.


7. PROPER NOUNS

After attending micro skill Link, Penelope moved to kingtons and worked at priest shopper and Shopper drug Mat.

After attending MicroSkills LINC, Penelope moved to kingston and worked at Price Chopper and Shopper Drug Mart.


8. SPELLING

teh quik blau fock jum ovr da Lajy doog.

The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog.


9. SVA

Who care about the winner? Pierre always win the game!
Everyone love to eat ice cream on cones, which is made of  sugar and flour.

Who cares about the winner? Pierre always wins the game!
Everyone loves to eat ice cream on cones, which are made of sugar and flour.