EDITING CHECKLIST I--Check for the following

PREP (Preposition)

Last week of Apirl, he finally arrived montreal. She likes to listen rock music. So she never searches Beethoven on the Internet.

On the last week of Apirl, he finally arrived in Montreal. She likes to listen to rock music. So she never searches for Beethoven on the Internet,


SVA (Subject-verb Agreement)

Norman love apple pie,which are rich in protein.
Norman loves apple pie, which is rich in protein.

Most Fijian think that every body are rich in Canada.
Most Fijian think that everybody is rich in Canada.


CS (Comma Splice)

Tom went to the store, although she was tired, Sue went with him, they took a bus there.

Tom went to the store. Although she was tired, Sue went with him. They took a bus there.


FRAG (Fragment)

When they opened the door. It was raining.
even though we were hungry. We very scared of lighting.
I back to Canada after three months.

When they opened the door, it was raining.
Even though we were hungry, we were very scared of lighting.
I 'll come back to Canada after three months.


RUN-ON SENTENCE

When they opened the door it was raining even though we were hungry we decided not to go to McDonalds.

When they opened the door, it was raining. Even though we were hungry, we decided not to go to McDonalds.

TENSE

Yesterday we went to the mall and I feel very tired after two hours.
Tom was fall down last week. He breaking his leg.

Yesterday we went to the mall and I felt very tired after two hours.

Tom fell down last week. He broke his leg.



PERIODS/COMMAS/CAPS/SPACES/RETURNS

Tom went to
the no frills . Although she
was tired ,Sue went with him .They took a bus
there. When
they
arrived the mall was closing .

Tom went to the No Frills. Although she was tired, Sue went with him. They took a bus there. When they arrived, the mall was closing .

 
PROPER NOUNS

After attending MicroSkill link, Pushpa moved to niagara fall and worked at basic food and McDonald.

After attending MicroSkills LINC, Pushpa moved to the Niagara Falls and worked at the Food Basic  and McDonald.

SPELLING

Sutdents msut leanr hwo two spelr correctley, especaly sins the hav spelcheck no they're compter.

Students must learn how to spell correctly, especially since they have spellcheck on the competer.