EDITING CHECKLIST II ----Check for the following:

SVA

Pushpa go to the store because her husbant, Kathigesu, are lazy.
Althogh she don't drive, she buys rice, which weight over a ton!


Pushpa goes to the store, because her husbant, Kathigesu, is lazy.

Althogh she doesn't drive, she buys rice, which weights over a ton!


SPELLING

Woe Cannada, hour homme an neytif land, truth parrot loev, yin al hour suns commend!

O Canada! Our home and native land! True patriot love in all thy sons command!


HARD RETURNS

i go went to
Sear  last week with my family . because it was raining ,we
did
not drive. We took a taxi there. When arrived,the
store had  close down .

I went to Sear last week with my family. Because it was raining, we did not drive. We took a taxi there. When we arrived, the store had close down.


RUN-ON SENTENCE

When they opened the window it was raining even though we love soccer we decided not to go to stadium.

When they opened the window, it was raining. Even though we love soccer, we decided not to go to stadium.


FRAGMENT

Even though we had no money. We went to the mall.
Johny and Jimmy very like eat Italian spaghetti.

Even though we had no money, we went to the mall.

Johny and Jimmy like to eat Italian spaghetti very much.


PREPOSITION

On montreal, he finally applied PR.
She like to look nature. So she enjoys taking pictures leaves turning Autumn.

In Montreal, he finally applied  for PR.

She like to look at nature. So she enjoys taking pictures of leaves turning colour in Autumn.


TENSE

Everyday we go to LINC class and Sharon is feel very tired after five hours.
She must to study harder. last term she is getting 40% for ESL

Everyday we go to LINC class and Sharon feels very tired after five hours.

She must study harder. Last term she got 40% for ESL


PROPER NOUNS

After MicroSkill link, kanesh moved to wancouwer and worked at resort ski weezler.

After MicroSkills LINC, kanesh moved to vancouver and worked at the Whistler Ski Resort.



CS

Pushpa went to the store, although he was tired, Kathigesu went with her, they took a train there.

Pushpa went to the store. Although he was tired, Kathigesu went with her. They took a train there.