EDITING CHECKLIST V ----Check for the following:

PREP

The seventh day the month July the seventh year Queen Elizabeth's rule, the German soldiers returned back to their camp in Berlin. They arrived to the capital city for meeting their families.

On the seventh day of the month of July in the seventh year of Queen Elizabeth's rule, the German soldiers returned back to their camp in Berlin. They arrived in the capital city to meet (or: for a meeting with) their families.



SVA

North American eat too much junk food, which are high in calories.
Most peop from Toronto thinks that one of the provinces are located in the Caribbean.

North Americans eat too much junk food, which is high in calories.

Most people from Toronto think that one of the provinces is located in the Caribbean.


CS(Comma Splice)

Magesh bought twenty apples, she paid in cash, when she arrived at the bus stop, she found out she didn't have any bus fare.
Although Queen Elizabeth is Queen of Canada, not many Canadians know that, they think she is only Queen of England.

Magesh bought twenty apples. She paid in cash. When she arrived at the bus stop, she found out she didn't have any bus fare.


Although Queen Elizabeth is Queen of Canada, not many Canadians know that. They think she is only Queen of England.


FRAGMENT

Even though Germany is not on this continent. Many Canadians following.
The soccer captain was punish for foul play
To win the game at all costs and not worry about the rules or the referee.

Even though Germany is not on this continent, many Canadians are following the news.

The soccer captain was punished for foul play.
Win the game at all costs and do not worry about the rules or the referee.


RUN-ON SENTENCE

Lack of exercise makes any attempt to lose weight more difficult to win the battle against fat you need not only to watch your diet but also to work out if you just focus on one and not both areas you will only keep putting on the pounds.

Lack of exercise makes any attempt to lose weight more difficult. To win the battle against fat, you need not only to watch your diet but also to work out. If you just focus on one and not both areas, you will only keep putting on the pounds.


TENSE

Yesterday, while Sinnathamby is watched the soccer game, Meena calling.
They knew they must to work harder to keep the jod, they must not stop to talk when on the jod.
Next week, Queen Elizabeth will visiting Nunavut, where people liced in ice house call igoos.

Yesterday, while Sinnathamby was watching the soccer game, Meena called.
They know they must work harder to keep the jod, they must not stop to talk when they were on the jod.
Next week, Queen Elizabeth will visite Nunavut, where people live in ice house called igoos.


PERIODS/COMMAS/CAPS/SPACES/HARD RETURNS

There was an old woman who  lived in a shoe
. There ,she  raised 15 monkeys.Food was scarce . Most nights ,she
whipped them
soundly and sent them to bed .

There was an old woman who lived in a shoe. There, she raised 15 monkeys. Food was scarce. Most nights, she whipped them soundly and sent them to bed.



PROPER NOUNS

Premier dalton mCguinTy of ontario visited Otawa last week to vist the general governor. They Talked for four Hours and visited the ancient civilizations Museum before heading for Dinner at rideau's halls

Premier Dalton McGuinty of Ontario visited Ottawa last week to vist the Governor General. They talked for four hours and visited the Ancient Civilizations Museum before heading for dinner at the Rideau Halls



SPELLING

Wancouwer,Calgry, Emonton,  Hallifak, Marka Ham, Oakaview, Hamewton, Monreal, Misaga, Scarboro, nad Belamton ar dificult nams tu espell.

Vancouver, Calgary, Edmonton, Halifix, Markham, Oakaville, Hamilton, Montreal, Mississauga, Scarbourgh and Brampton are difficult names to spell.