EDITING CHECK LIST IV ___ Check for the following:

1. PREP (Preposition)

The protesters believed fighting to human rights. They shouted for global warming the police arrived. They ignore the police warning, they were arrested and sent jail.

 The protesters believed in fighting for human rights. They shouted against global warming until the police arrived. They ignore the police warning, they were arrested and sent to jail.



2. SVA (Subject-Verb Agreement)

Many people loves Korean food, which are low in calories.
Most G8 leaders think that nobody live in poverty.

Many people love Korean food, which are low in calories.

Most G8 leaders think that nobody lives in poverty.

3. CS (Comma Splic)

The helicopter landed at Pearson International Airport, from there it flew to Huntsville, at the end of the G8 conference, it took the world leaders back to the airport.

The helicopter landed at Pearson International Airport, From there, it flew to Huntsville. At the end of the G8 conference, it took the world leaders back to the airport.


4. FRAG (Fragment)

Although we were busy. We watched the World Cup Finals.
Because she loved her home country, North Korea.
They going to buy a bunch of vuvuzelas tomorrow.

Although we were busy, we watched the World Cup Finals.

Because She loved her home country, North Korea.
They are going to buy a bunch of vuvuzelas tomorrow.

5. RUN-ON SENTENCE

The traffic during the G20 summit was a nightmare cars, buses, and trucks were stuck for hours on the highway even though the police tried their best most Torontonians were upset at the inconvenience they had to face

The traffic during the G20 summit was a nightmare. Cars, buses, and trucks were stuck for hours on the highway. Even though the police tried their best, most Torontonians were upset at the inconvenience they had to face.


6. TENSE

If I was a millionaire, I was take plane to South Africa.
Have I knew it so boring, I will not watch yesterday's game.
Zoe must to work from home next week when the G20 conference will meet downtown.

If I were a millionaire, I would take plane to South Africa.

Had I known it so boring, I would not have watched yesterday's game.
Zoe must to work from home next week when the G20 conference will meets downtown.


7. PERIODS/COMMAS/CAPS/SPACES

Mr Harper travelled to huntsville . There ,the G8 leaders   spent two days in meeting.Security was tight. While they met,Air Traffic was closed .

Mr. Harper travelled to Huntsville. There, the G8 leaders spent two days in meeting. Security was tight. While they met, air traffic was closed .



8. PROPER NOUNS

After the RMCP warned the Protesters, they marched down Young Straight and attacked Sear and eaten centers.

After the RCMP warned the protesters, they marched down Yonge Street and attacked Sears and Eaton Centre.



9. SPELLING

To g-20 counties incude Austrila, Canadian, Chinese, Dutch, French, German,
Indianesia, manmar, Newzeland, Putouya, Swiss, UEA, Uragay, Usa, adn Zimbwe?

The G20 countries include Australia, Canadian, Chinesea, Netherland, France, Germany,

Indonesia, myanmar, New zealand, Portugal, Switzerland, EUA USA, Uruguay, and Zimbabwe?